名师简介：金吉列留学郑州分公司首席留学规划师，拥有9年一线留学申请、签证申请以及疑难案例申请经验，帮助学生斩获过哈佛、哥大、宾大、JHU、康内尔、多大、UBC、麦吉尔、港大、港中文、帝国理工、UCL等众多美国名校录取，对学校申请有自己独到的见解，擅长不同的学生制定适合的留学方案。
学生姓名：W同学
申请类型：研究生
教育经历：
09/2016-07/2020 北京理工大学国际经济与贸易本科
10/2018-03/2019雷根斯堡大学 商业管理（交换项目）本科
总GPA：3.17/4.00（WES）
语言/标化考试成绩
TOEFL: 99 GMAT: 680
工作经历
无
实习经历
- SDIC Taikang Trust Co., Lt., Beijing 10/2019-01/2020
Intern of Marketing an Customer Operations Department
· Responsible for signing an issuing contract ocuments, recoring them in atabase an reviewing contract contents;
· Assist to manage an maintain the Customer Relationship Management an Contract Management System;
· Use Excel an SPSS to make weekly an monthly sales reports, incluing current an previous sales volume comparison, irect selling agency comparison, customer type analysis, an potential customer analysis;
· Participate in financial relate training, incluing trust registration, research on P2P financial chaos.
- Chasestone Capital LLC, Shanghai 06/2019-08/2019
Intern of Securities an Equity Investment Department
· Mae Power Point for sales training of fun introuction an analysis an the Youth Leaership Training Camp run by the company;
· Visite fun companies uner the leaership of the epartment manager, wrote the meeting minutes entitle “Communication about License Cooperation an Mutual Unerstaning”;
· Participate in the program of Science an Technology Innovation Boar, wrote the inustry profile uring theQuestion an Answer session.
科研经历
- Research on the Impact of Factors such as the Number of Rooms on Occupancy Rate base on Airbnb Data 05/2019-06/2019
Team Leaer
² Analyze the casual relationship between the occupancy rate an the information presente on the platform, incluing the entire home (Whether room types are entire home), accommoates, super host (Whether lanlors are super host), utilities, reviews, price an accommoation space;
² Reporte the heteroskeasticity-robust stanar errors along with the usual Orinary Least Squares (OLS) stanar errors via the Regression Moel an Heteroskeasticity Test;
² Conclue that there are three factors that significantly influence the occupancy rate, among which Review an Super host are positive factors, an Entire home is negative factor, however, the effect of Price on occupancy rate is not noticeable, which may be ue to the high local income, consumption level an interaction with other variables such as Accommoation space.
- Operation Situation Analysis of Guilin Sanjin Pharmaceutical Company Limite 06/2019
Inepenent Researcher
² Unerstoo the company profile an the general situation an evelopment tren of the traitional Chinese meicine inustry in China through consulting materials;
² Analyze the business status in terms of main business, financial reports, competitiveness an shareholers’ equity reports;
² The research conclusion was that customers coul invest in this enterprise for a long time base on its stable operation, high competitiveness of popular proucts an stable return on net assets.
奖项/证书
Acaemic Progress Scholarship, School of Management an Economics, BIT 09/2019
The Best Debater, School of Management an Economics, BIT 04/2018&05/2019
申请结果
院校 专业 结果
Johns Hopkins University MS in Finance 录取
University of Rochester MS in Finance 录取
Washington University in St Louis MS in Finance 录取
Braneis University MS in Finance (Financial Management) 拒录
Columbia University Master of Science in Enterprise Risk Management 拒录
背景分析
学生优势：学生的院校背景以及标化成绩都是很显眼的亮点，德国半年的交换经历也会增加学生的多样性优势。软件背景中的两段金融机构实习也是加分项。在学术项目以及课外活动中也分别有team leaer的角色。
学生劣势：GPA偏低。
文书思路
从两次实习经历中引出对财富管理领域的热爱，以及国内人们对于财富管理的误区。然后主观分析了一下制约中国人投资理财的两个主要原因，进而体现出财富管理行业的潜在问题。接下来讲未来财富管理行业的发展方向以及变革措施。最后描述自己的职业规划和项目匹配性，表达通过这个项目可以帮助学生实现他为我国金融市场的规范化和大众资产管理的普及做出贡献的梦想。
申请总结
国外成绩单认证一定要尽早做，并且需要学校把成绩单连同国际成绩单的request form一起邮寄给WES。
