一、学生背景
易同学
研究生直录
Taiyuan University of Technology； Sep. 2015 - Jul. 2019
Bachelor of Engineering in Software Engineering;
GPA: 4.02/5.0
语言成绩：TOEFL 85
标化成绩：GRE 302
二、工作经历
1、DHC Software Co., Lt.
Sep. 2020-Present
Software Engineer
Ø Designe the submoule fuction, frame esign, implement technology
Ø Achieve the front en an back en separation base on SSM
Ø Use MySQL cluster as program atabase an use Nginx to achieve reverse proxy an loa balancing
三、实习经历
1、Shenzhen Institute of Sustainable Development
Jun. 2020-Aug. 2020
Network Engineer
Ø Built the official website of Institute for Sustainable Development framework, programme WeChat APP an official account
2、China Unicom (Shanxi) Inustry Internet Co., Lt.
Jul. 2017 - Aug. 2017 & Feb. 2018 - Feb. 2018
Intern
Ø Was in charge of problem communication, requirement research, requirement analysis, prototype esign pertaining to the intelligent vehicle management project
Ø Provie suggestions in software interaction esign an software testing, etc.
3、China Unicom (Shanxi) Inustry Internet Co., Lt.
Jun. 2017
Intern
Ø Got familiarize with the methos of obtaining the web-shell of CMS websites
Ø Applie relevant tools to conuct vulnerability mining for atabase injection in CMS websites, etc.
四、科研经历
1、Document-retrieval System
Jun. 2018 - Jul. 2018
Project Manager
Project Contents: Base on big ata an istribute systems, the ata of the uploae files an the specific content were analyze, an the system of intelligent recommenation (embee file ataset) was mae. The Haoop an SSM frameworks were utilize to facilitate the operation.
- Formulate the overall evelopment plans; helpe project team members to buil an configure the Ubuntu operating system environment
- Organize project requirements seminars of guiing the subsequent nees analysis; compile the coe for SSM framework an Haoop
- Implemente system testing in many cases, etc.
2、Track an Fiel Games Management System
Jan. 2018
Technician of Software Development an Testing
Project Contents: We create a stuent information management system, which coul achieve front-en evelopment an page esign, by using html, css, JavaScript.
- Compile the requirement analysis
- Was responsible for recoring project progress; participate in the esign of the front-en page of the management system
- Conucte ata analysis an atabase esign for the back-en evelopment
- Programme the JavaBean coe snippet to make changes an tests for incompatible parts of Winows an iOS, etc.
3、Application of Data Structure in Small an Meium-size Software
Jun. 2017
Project Manager
Project Contents: We applie ata structure an algorithm esign an research to esign specific small an meium-size software entities. C or C++ were use in programming, which coul be embee as a moule in a large system.
- Took charge of analyzing algorithms an ata structures an applying them to programming
五、奖项/证书
1、Scholarship of College of Software at Taiyuan University of Technology
2015-2018
2、The Excellent Director of the Stuents' Association Union in TYUT
Oct. 2017
3、The First Place of Group Competition in the Sign Language Gymnastics Competition
Nov. 2015
六、录取结果
南加州大学简介
南加利福尼亚大学（University of Southern California），简称南加大（USC），是美国西海岸私立研究型大学，位于美国洛杉矶市，1880年成立，南加大位居U.S.NEWS美国最佳大学排名第22名 、QS美国大学排名第15位 、2021泰晤士高等教育世界大学排名第53位 。
校友及教职工中共有10位诺贝尔奖得主、 6位麦克阿瑟天才奖得主、1位图灵奖得主。 校友获得奥斯卡奖数量全美第一，包括斯皮尔伯格、乔治-卢卡斯等影坛巨匠 。南加大在硅谷校友人数位居全美第四，世界顶尖计算机科学家入围人数世界第四 。
学校培养了众多航天与科技界人才，如登月第一人阿姆斯特朗，高通创始人维特比等。 校友会“特洛伊家族”中十亿美元以上富翁人数居全美高校第四。在历届上奥运会上，截止2021年南加大的学生和校友累计获得153枚金牌、96枚银牌和77枚铜牌，金牌数量和总量居全美高校第一。与洛克希德·马丁公司联合设立世界顶尖量子计算中心 ，其被美国国土安全部选为第一所国土安全卓越中心。世界第一个防病毒软件都诞生于此。
七、背景分析
学生优势：学生本科专业对口，成绩优异，在校期间参加相关活动比较多。
学生劣势：语言成绩较差，对于申请不太上心。
八、文书思路
文书以学生的专业性为主，突出学生对于CS的热爱以及想要继续学习的信心。由于学生在校期间参加了很多科研活动，所以文书主要写了学生的实践能力。再次申请的过程中，将学生工作经历添加进去，表现出从一个象牙塔的学生到职场小白的转变，以及通过身份的转变，对于CS专业的理解更加深刻，对于自己的目标也更加清晰。
九、申请总结
学生为再次申请学生。2020季已经录取OSU，2021准备再申请试试。但是并不刷分，用之前成绩提交。在此背景下，只能通过学生大学期间的各种活动和专业能力体现学生的优势。
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