误区一：废话连篇不知所云
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Topic 1-Shoul college stuents be allowe to get marrie?
This topic is very interesting. I’m very intereste in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college stuent an I’m not marrie……
修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题
In my opinion, it woul not be a wise ecision to allow college stuents to get marrie 。
Topic 2-Will moern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing wor as the sole source of information?
Ok, this topic is a very goo topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a frien, he likes go on the internet very much. Every ay, he uses internet to rea news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more an more important in our aily life 。
Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
误区二：中式英文人见人晕
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Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opene angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there 。
Topic3- Is there fairness in toay’s business worl?
I think in toay’s society, there is no fairness in the business worl. For example, I always choppe when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The avantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many avantage. I believe if a people always o ba things, he will get “baoying” 。
误区三：语法错误惨不忍睹
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Topic-If chilren behave baly, shoul their parents accept responsibility an also be punishe?
About this problem, my think is if chilren behave baly, then parents are not right. Because teach chil is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besies chilren is also shoul 。
误区四：偏离主题无轨电车
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Topic-It is sai that nowaays one can not acquire the qualifications an quality essential to success through university eucation. To what extent o you agree or isagree with the statement?
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, an etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friens an from books. All in all, we can learn from many places 。
误区五：观点模糊态度暧昧
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Topic-Shoul college stuents be allowe to get marrie?
I think this topic is very har to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, an not marrie, so this topic is very ifficult for me……
误区六：过分简单没有重点
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Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
误区七：用词不当 表达不准
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Topic-Shoul college stuents be allowe to get marrie?
I think college stuents shoul not be allowe to get marrie because they are very young an so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family 。
误区八：意思重复原地踏步
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Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a goo thing. An it is a ba thing. It brings no benefits to our society an it is even sometimes harmful to our society 。
误区九：中国俗语胡乱翻译
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Topic 1-Is it goo to have a large family?
I think it is goo to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……
正确说法：
Happiness lies in having many chilren
Topic 2 -Shoul we preten to know everything or amit our ignorance?
We all know, our Chinese ol fathers an granfathers sai: “Know is know, on’t know is on’t know”……
Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influence by his/her family?
Chinese ol wors says very goo: Dragon born ragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……
Topic 4- The avantage of being a nice person
I believe one sentence:“A goo person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Goo has goo pay, ba has ba pay” 。
误区十：观点武断 态度强硬
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Topic1-The importance of confience
In my opinion, confience is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the worl are full of confience. While those people who on’t have confience, they all have faile 。
Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem
I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who on’t obey the traffic rules, we shoul put all of them into prison. If we o that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.
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