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第一段:Introuction 介绍自己
此地方必须让学校的招生官知道你是谁,什么时候写的信件等。你也可以提到你对此Deferral很失望,但是请确保用词正向并清楚表达为何你对此学校的兴趣。
Ms. Anne Smith
Associate Director of Amissions
Columbia University
1130 Amsteram Avenue
New York, NY 10027
Dear Ms. Smith,
Thank you for returning my call on Monay (X-ate). Although beingeferre from Early Decision was a big isappointment, I‘m grateful that I still have the possibility to be part of theColumbia University Class of 2019. Columbia has been my first choice since Ivisite last fall. As someone who loves being challenge acaemically, I trulyenjoye seeing Professor Allen push his stuents in the Sociology of Genercourse I attene. I appreciate how involve Columbia stuents manage to bewhile still taking rigorous courses. The fact that I coul major in Sociologywhile getting to watch ozens of stuent prouctions an spen a semesterabroa in Argentina is truly thrilling. I know that I woul be an active partof the stuent boy.
第二段:Upates 个人更新
解释你有任何学术上或课外活动上的更新内容,利用条列式的方式更新最新成就。请记住,不要重复先前在申请书上已经列举出来的活动。
I woul like to upate you on my recent acaemic an extracurricularachievements. The following has occurre since I submitte my application inOctober:
In the most challenging acaemic program at St. Mary‘s High School, I receive five A’s in my APcourses (incluing AP Calculus) an one B+ in honors statistics in our secontrimester. I will continue to excel acaemically in my last trimester an willgrauate with high honors an in the top 5 percent of my grae.
In aition to my continue involvement with Habitat for Humanityan tutoring mile schoolers in the neighborhoo, my soccer team won ourregional tournament. I score the most goals in the league an was name MostValuable Player.
A portion of an article I wrote for our school newspaper, The St.Mary‘s Eagle, was publishe in our town’s localpaper, The Harris town Daily. I was aske to contribute an aitional pieceabout my volunteer work, an it will be feature next month.
第三段:Conclusion 总结
在总结部分,再次说明为何你想去此学校。如果你有计划接受条件式入学或等待名单,也在此内说明并感谢招生官的时间去重新审核你的申请文书。
I woul be honore to contribute to the Columbia community as awriter for the Columbia Spectator, an woul continue my volunteer work as atutor in New York City. It woul be thrilling to learn uner prestigiousprofessors an conuct research in the sociology epartment. If there is anyaitional information you nee, on’t hesitate to contact me at 646.657.5543 or cbrown@gmail.com. Thank you for yourtime an consieration. Columbia is my first choice for college. If accepte, Iwoul absolutely come to campus in the fall. There is no school I woul ratheratten.
Sincerely,
Claire Brown