名师简介:张佳慧老师——金吉列首席留学规划师,8年一线留学、签证申请经验,美高、美本、美研、博士全能型老师,拥有哈佛大学高端申请成功案例,擅长疑难案例精准解析,屡次助力低GPA实现完美逆袭,0语言也能搞定名校!
学生姓名:Y同学
申请类型:本新
申请专业:Communications/psychology
教育经历:Chaminae College Preparatory High School, 9-12年级
GPA:GPA:4.0/4.0
标准化考试成绩:TOEFL113 SAT1510
活动经历:
Intern, Life Begins at Forty Documentary Team, China Central Television
(CCTV)06/2018-07/2018
l Founing Partner, “Chicken an Rabbit Math Problems” Club
l Member, FooForwar 2018
l Member, Homeless Heart Club2018
l Volunteer, Mahjong Club of Brookale Nursing Home01/2017-05/2017
l Volunteer, Rie-On Racecourse08/2016-12/2017
l Teaching Assistant, Chinese Teacher01/2016-05/2016
l Choir Member, Choir of Chaminae College Preparatory High School08/2015-05/2016
l Ban Member, Spring Music Festiva04/2016
l Volunteer Ambassaor, Special Olympic03/2016
Member, Chinese Culture Club2015-present
奖励证书
l Certificate of Laureat Honors for three consecutive years2015-2016, 2016-2017, 2017-2018
l Silver Metal, Laureat National, Le Gran Concours 2016, 2017
l National Acaemy of Future Scientists an Technologists Awar of Excellence 02/21/2017
l Excellence in the Stuy of French I 2017
申请院校 录取专业
Universityof California, Berkeley Interisciplinary communications
UCSB Pre-communications
审理周期:分11月1,11月30和 1月1三个截止日期寄出
素材挖掘+文书思路:由于学生申请psychology和 communications两个专业,所以在essay中我建议学生突出自己在语言方面的天赋,自己从抑郁到心理逐渐改善的积极主动的过程。学生essay中写到的与父亲的不可化解的矛盾,我也引导学生从中体现出自己的对这种关系的反思,自己不论是在意识上还是行动上有没有主动采取过什么方法。在whyschoolessay的撰写中也从学校的相关课程和项目上与学生的兴趣相符合